I found it easy to write in my report. I found hard to do my paragraph in my writing book. I found it challenging to write five paragraphs in to my learning. Next time I need
to include mote detail in to my learning.
Monday, August 17, 2020
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ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Austin and I attend Gisborne intermediate school in Tairāwhiti.I enjoyed some of the facts.I think you could improve on the text on the fourth slide next time It is a little hard to read.
kia ora My name is hermione and I go to gisborne intermediate school you must be really good at building in fortnite what is your favourite skin
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora my name is Caleb I attend Gisborne intermediate school you must be really good at building and playing fortnite
ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Rytcous I enjoyed the things about fortnite but you could make the words bigger to read
ReplyDeletekia ora my name is Storm and i come from gisborne intermediate I have learnt heaps from fortnite and I see your really good so what is your favourite pickaxe??
ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Lydia i attend gisborne intermediate and i think it is cool that you have done a report on some thing you like to do i think that sometimes the Gifs as the background is not the best choice because it makes you want to watch that instead of reading the writing but that is what i think.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Kayden and I attend Gisint in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.
I really like how informative your report is even if it is fortnite. A problem is the backgrounds as it is eye catching which made me just wanna look at that instead of reading so maybe you could just use normal images
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DeleteThanks for the comment Kaden. Maybe next time I do Led to change my background just images not just Changing backgrounds but thanks. And have a good day.
Deletechur i like ur slide about ur the best game in the world it gta
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